Phoenix

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by jessmonsilva (Taking over the boards, one topic at a time.) on Tuesday, 22-Sep-2009 19:43:54

She rose from the fire;
Her one goal was to sing;
A melody of sadness;
Being lost without her wings.

Reborn from the ashes;
Her life would start again;
another winding road for her;
A life without a friend.

But she's a bird of prey;
Noone would understand;
She'll always be alone;
As she soars across the land.

She'll live another lonely life;
She'll heal another soul;
Then be engulfed by fire;
Just like a lump of coal.

And when the storm is quiet;
And the morning sun has risen;
The phoenix is reborn again;
To take on another mission.

She'll sing another melody;
and heal another soul;
Then once more be consumed by fire;
Just like that lump of coal.

Post 2 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Thursday, 01-Oct-2009 22:04:09

This peace is quite symbolic. Me gusta. The only error I noticed was that no one was written as one word instead of two.

Post 3 by jessmonsilva (Taking over the boards, one topic at a time.) on Thursday, 01-Oct-2009 22:51:46

Hey thanks much, I was feeling quite emotional when I wrote that poem. I'm definitely glad it's symbolism can definitely be seen.